Dave P - 7/24/08

Hey D'Arcy - HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAIKUS HERE!

age-ist jokes are stale
so classless and in poor taste....
oh well what the hell.

man sits before cake
many candles blind the eye!
is it july 4?

twenty four July
years and y e a r s and Y E A R S ago!!....
Earth is D'arcified
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Angus - July 24, 2008

never done haiku before but here's my crack at the can ...

happy birthday D'
monday night men resounded
beers are on us

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David J - 7/24/08

just give us the rules...and watch out

Birthdays come so fast
As we slow down and reflect
a flame brief candle

July twenty three
my son inhaled for first time
I hold my breath in

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Dave P - 7/24/08

David these are cool!!!

sorry, mistake made
wrong D'ate, my mind wandering
as it's known to do.

breaking tradition,
my haiku has some commas,
and a period.

:--)


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Graeme - 7/25/08

You guys have all gone quite mad - and I love it LOL

I actually wrote this 2 weeks ago at a Monday night.

Four cowboys
In a bar
Reciting poetry

OK its not 5-7-5 - blah to rules.

See you all soon.

happy BD D'Arcy.

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David J - 7/25/08

Four urban cowboys
get a long little doggy
herding toy poodles

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D'Arcy - 7/25/08

Wow! Thanks for the Birthday Wishes - Total Surprise!

And yes, it was the 23rd  (see what happens -- yuh make a simple little mistake and yuh get jumped on - By Yuhself Yet!!)

is it possible
monday man's happy birthday
cause haiku onslaught

And yes - beers accepted! (can I bank them over time?)

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Angus - 7/25/08

seven urban men
sitting on a long red couch
pass the popcorn eh?

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D'Arcy - 7/25/08

(how bout haiku with attachment?)

life is surprises
the stillness of a dead snake
can cause much movement

(please forgive me, but I just had to share this)

double click on the image below

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David J - 7/26/08

Haiku with attachments

Is crevice tool lost?
lamented the sad vacuum
no end to my hose

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Ted - 7/26/08

D' man,

Beers banked on ice
Haiku mesmerizing us
Yeast for the thirsty

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Angus - 7/26/08

what about Haiku Movie Reviews ...

Dinner With Andre
lament the death of a quail
through half closed eyes

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Dodge ball if you can
monkey wrench takes out eye
underdog takes all

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Boondock Saint with gun
shooting bad guys in the head
Vigilantism

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Twelve Angry Men
locked in sweaty retort
fate hung by a thread

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Dave P - 7/25/08

You guys are too good! next week sonnets?

P


How about haikus in really bad taste?

girls have periods
absolutely no commas
bloody bad grammar

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Dave P - 7/26/08


Hey, how about iconoclastic Haikus:

Five seven then five
Tradition hangs heavily
if you let it

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Dave P -  7/28/08

this arrived in my mailbox, unflagged as spam.  for a moment I thought it was one of you just simply going off the haiku deep end!!!

singlet scrutable boisterous

histrionic fugitive norris? barley, enough chambers.
scrutable flood boisterous firm starboard starboard, boisterous
word westbound managua rapture hydroxide.

pen enough.

Hey, it's three lines!...

See you later!

P

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